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I remember the first day I met you
I was so cold and lonely

I never met anyone that filled me so much
Like you have

You have supported me
When I was on my hands and knees

You lifted me up
When I was in need

You caressed my hair
When I was in pain

As the sun hit my face
You said "It'll be okay"

You carried my tears
And bathed yourself in them

You shared the pain in my soul
And placed it in your heart

With these confessions
I stand proud to say I love you

The revelation unspoken
The silhouette unseen
©2003-2009 ~Tribal-Kishin
:icontribal-kishin:

Author's Comments

This is a poem i just thought...if there are typos... Im using a SMALL laptop... and i have big fingers lol...I will add a picture once I have one... :D

Note: I know it doesnt rhyme.... people are used to seeing my poems rhyming... but this is more of an open letter to orycal than an actual poem...

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soo sweet!... yep!

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*rocks back and forth*

*hums quietly*

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